is better on DOMA than Livelox, did you have to 'doctor' it?
Yes. The DOMA route is more like what I ran, but there are still a couple of bits that were too hard to iron out.
Looks like a good run and you obviously feel the same way.
Interestingly, a big chunk of your course (12 to 24) is almost the M45 4 to 17 in reverse (except that you ran the butterflies the same way) - only differences are that your 23 is 100m or so south of our 5 (enough to shift the route choice balance) and we had an extra control between your 21 and 22.